Term 2
My goal is to move to 2P to 2A in my recount writing
week 2
I wrote about Killer Hill and I gained a 3p in writing because I used heaps of adverbs such as rapidly.
week4
I wrote a recount about the mud slide and I achieved a 3P+ I gained this because I used onomatopoeia and alliteration.
week6
I researched and wrote a report about a earthworm and I gained 3B. I found out that earthworms were around in the time of the dinosaurs.
week8
I wrote a speech about the importance of eating veges and I achieved a 3B


Term 3
My goal for this term is to move up from 3P to 3A
Week 2
I wrote a Recount about a frosty, fogy, game and I achieved another 3p.
Week 4
I wrote a recount about farting in public and I made it more interesting by using Juicy, tender, feast of food.
Week 6
I did a poem about cross country and I gained a 3b/3p by using some onomatopoeia


















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